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This is my story idea.



At the beginning of the 21st century some kids were born half animal. The ones who are born like that are known as Black Bloods. If you are part cat you have a tail, claws, and ears that you can hide at anytime. If you鈥檙e a dog you have fangs, ears, and a tail and so on for different animals. The Black Bloods can transform into their full animal form whenever they choose. If a Black Blood get scared, stressed, or excited while they are hiding their outer animal parts they will start to come out one by one.



These are some of the characters that I have come up with.



Name: Kaine

Age:15

Gender: Male

Animal: Wolf

Personality: Mysterious, Brave, protective, loving, and cunning.

Description: Black hair, Grey eyes, Muscular, Wears black fingerless gloves,Dark blue pants, A black t-shirt, and a long, black sleeveless coat.

Info: Kaine was separated from his parents at the age of five. He is now fifteen and steals from rich families to survive. If he steals something of value, he sells it at a black market. He still goes to school and knows other Black Bloods. Black Bloods are people who can transform into animals.

Animal Parts: Fangs, Tail, Ears.



Name: Orion (Pronounced like Oryan)

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Animal: Tiger

Personality: Mean, Hateful, Destructive, and Fearless.

Description: Blonde hair, brown eyes, muscular, Wears a blood red t-shirt, a black jacket, blue jeans, and a necklace with a claw on it.

Animal Parts: Claws, Tail, Ears, Eyes.

Info: Orion is Kaine's older brother. Orion is nineteen and knows about Kaine, but Kaine doesn't even know that he has a brother. He has his own group of Black Bloods. If he finds Kaine he will kill him. All Orion wants is his families fortune.



Name: Aaron

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Animal: Monkey

Personality: Outgoing, Athletic, Caring, and Protective.

Description: Brown Hair, Green eyes, Flexible, Not very muscular, Wears a white t-shirt, Green cargo shorts, and a shark tooth necklace.

Animal Parts: Tail.

Info: Aaron is Kaine鈥檚 best friend. His parents died in a fire when he was 13 caused by a robbery. The necklace he wears was found in the fire. It belonged to his dad. Aaron believes that the necklace is his good luck charm.



Name: Talon

Age:16

Gender: Male

Animal: Falcon

Personality: Protective, Adventurous, and Daring.

Animal Parts: Wings.

Description: Dark brown hair, Hazel eyes, Muscular, Wears a black leather Jacket, White tank top, and blue jeans.

Info: He is Aaron鈥檚 friend, but is in the competition for Nicole鈥檚 love with him. He is the only Black Blood in the group who can fly.



Name: Nicole

Age:15

Gender: Female

Animal: Lioness

Personality: Kind, and independent.

Animal Parts: Claws, tail, eyes.

Description: Blonde hair, Blue eyes, Thin, Wears jean shorts, and a purple t-shirt.

Info: Nicole is Shelby鈥檚 friend and normally gets all of the guy. Aaron and Talon both like her, but she just sits around and watches them fight instead of stopping it.



Name: Shelby

Age:14

Gender: Female

Animal: Fox

Personality: Shy, caring, and brave.

Animal Parts: Fangs, Tail, Ears.

Description: Brown hair, Brown eyes, Skinny, Wears a pink t-shirt, A heart locket, and blue jeans.

Info: Shelby is one of Kaine鈥檚 friends from school. She likes Kaine, but is to shy to tell him. She lives with her parents, but sneaks out to hang out with Kaine every night. Shelby, Kaine, and their other friends have a group of Black Bloods.Do You like my characters?
I love your idea! (I'm kind of jealous that I didn't think of it first.)

I'm kind of confused how Kaine and Orion are brothers. . .I'm guessing that they can be related without being the same animal?

Are the parents Black Bloods also? Is that how Kaine and Orion turned out? Like their Mum was a tiger and their Dad a wolf? Or are their parents human and Kain and Orion were just 'freaks of nature'?

(Sorry, I put too much thought into things.)

But over all, nice idea and great characters! I love Shelby already! She sounds soo cute!

Keep up with the good work! I'll be waiting for updates! xx
Mmhm, I like it all, the idea, the characters. It's all really good.

If you would like, I would love to read what you have.

Give my Opinion.



:)) Keep up the good work.Do You like my characters?
Isn't this like that animorphous series or something with the pictures that made me scared to read it...?
awesome kaine and orionDo You like my characters?
yes i love Kaine and Nicole can't wait to hear more
I dunno, I kind of think Nicole would work really well with Talon... the fact that he can fly works much better metaphorically in the story. Also, I think you should have someone more antagonistic in the story, like, I dunno, this is just a suggestion, but someone like



Name: Kat

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Animal: Dog (see, it's ironic)

Personality: flaky, whiney, whorish

Animal Parts: snout, paws, stubby tail

Description: Long, jet black ethereal hair with red highlights, crystalline grey eyes, wears white kimono, and a black choker.

Info: Idk, you should really make that up yourself.



Good luck, and keep us posted! =D