How do you like two characters for my novel?

Name:Kaine

Gender:Male

Animal:Wolf

Personality:Mysterious, Brave, protective, loving, and cunning.

Description:Black hair, Grey eyes, Muscular, Wears black fingerless gloves,Dark blue pants, A black t-shirt, and a long, black sleeveless coat.

Story:Kaine was seperated from his parents at the age of five. He is now fifteen and steals from rich families to survive. If he steals something of value, he sells it at a black market.He still goes to school and knows other Black Bloods. Black Bloods are people who can transform into animals.

Animal Parts:Fangs,Tail,Ears.



Name:Orion (Pronounced like Oryan)

Gender:Male

Animal:Tiger

Personality:Mean, Hateful, Destructive, and Fearless.

Description:Blonde hair, brown eyes, muscular, Wears a blood red t-shirt, a black jacket, blue jeans, and a necklace with a claw on it.

Animal Parts:Claws, Tail, Ears, Eyes.

Story:Orion is Kaine's older brother. Orion is nineteen and knows about Kaine, but Kaine doesn't even know that he has a brother. He has his own group of Black Bloods. If he finds Kaine he will kill him. All Orion wants is his families fortune.How do you like two characters for my novel?
They're not bad Dalton, but I think you should go into a little more depth when planning them. Try filling out this character chart with your characters: http://www.charlottedillon.com/Character鈥?/a>



Otherwise, I'd say they're fine. (: